Tuesday, December 17, 2013

VEILED ROSE Read-Along: Chapter 7, Part Two

Moving right along with the story today, getting very near the end of Part Two. But a quick reminder, if you need to know how to get your name entered in the weekly giveaway, check out the November 30 post. Also, don't forget to ask your questions in the comments down below. I will answer them as soon as I can!

Now to discover the repercussions of yesterday's startling revelation . . .

Chapter 7

We pick up with Rose Red on the rumble seat on the back of the carriage, leaving her mountain home, perhaps forever. For the moment, at least, we don’t know what transpired following Leo’s dramatic declaration.

A declaration in which Leo really stepped out of boyhood into young manhood, asserting his authority over those at Hill House who had always intimidated him before. It’s a step for Leo. It’s a step.

She fled: We soon learn that Rose Red, horrified upon realizing that her beloved childhood friend is, in fact, the crown prince of the nation, fled back into the forest. She quite possibly intended to never show her face again, embarrassed as she is! That is a pretty big detail to miss.

But then again, why should she have guessed it? She doesn’t talk to anyone but Beana, doesn’t get close enough to the people of Hill House to overhear any of their discussions. She’s never seen any pictures of the prince. I mean, she might not have even known the crown prince’s name until just then! She is quite remote and isolated. There was no reason in the world why she would recognize him.

Which made her the ideal playmate for a lonely young Leo. No matter what else happens in his life, he knows that the bond between him and Rose Red was real. She truly was his friend for his sake and nothing more.

Leo arrives: Leo pursued Rose Red up the forest path, though probably not by the same strange paths she likes to use (fey creature that she is). But he had a good guess where she would go, and he is proven right.

I suspect that Rose Red wanted him to catch. If he was going to chase her at all, that is. Otherwise, she would have vanished. We’ve seen her do it before, stepping onto the Faerie Paths and disappearing. But she doesn’t. She allows him to catch up, allows him to beg her to come back with him.

She wants him to want her. She doesn’t want to be the desperate one.

“It doesn’t change anything.” Poor Leo. He really is a sweet boy in this scene as he tries to convince Rose Red that his title and her veils don’t really matter. And here, at least, he believes it. And Rose Red believes it too.

But is it the truth? A lasting truth? Can their friendship really endure such enormous social divide and prejudice?

The Dragon in her mind: One last time, the Dragon (or Dream) roars his threats in Rose Red’s mind, warning her that he will make Leo pay if she goes away with him. But Rose Red does want so desperately to escape her horrid life! And Leo is the best thing she knows, not to mention her best chance at escape.

So she agrees to go. To be his servant, not his friend. But to be with him. To be, she hopes, safe.

My child: Is Leo really the best thing in Rose Red’s life? Perhaps not. Her Imaginary Friend calls out to her and promises to be near, no matter how far away she travels. But she doesn’t believe he exists, not really, not beyond her imagination. So she clings to Leo instead, trusting him to provide for her as he has promised.

Even as the wood thrush sings, Don’t forget that I love you.

Rose Red has become quite the sad little realist these days. Hurt and heartbreak have done a number on her, though her nature still longs to trust and to love. She’s not totally bitter, but she’s very much afraid.

Perhaps not all that unlike many of us.

A bafflement of voices: Poor Rose Red is so beset by so many voices, it’s really no wonder she believes she’s mad! And don’t forget, she hears her goat talking like a person . . . which is enough to make even the most die-hard animal fanatic would have to pause and consider the nature of sanity.

The Starflower Fountain: Here in this first introduction to the Eldest’s House, we are met with the vision of the Starflower Fountain, standing in the front courtyard. Once more we are reminded of the story of Maid Starflower and the Wolf, which is obviously a story of some significance in this world.

Note that the stone Starflower boasts a small stone songbird on her shoulder, “the significance of which everyone had long since forgotten.” Sad how the very most important parts of legends and mythologies vanish, leaving behind only shadowy tales of derring-do without real substance.

Queen Starflower: We are told that half of the girls in Southlands are still named after Maid Starflower, the nation’s most popular literary heroine. And then we are introduced to Queen Starflower. A woman who is about as different from the original Starflower as a woman can be! Not a bad person, by any means. But a very stern, very strict, very imposing character.

And, as the text says, she knows that she must find an equally strong queen for her son. For Prince Lionheart is not a particularly strong character, she knows. “Stubborn as well, which Starflower considered the most dangerous form of weakness.” (p. 163) She’s an intelligent woman, and she sees more of her son’s true character than most people perceive.

And she has decided Daylily would make him a proper wife.

Northern influence: Readers of Dragonwitch will understand the reference to “northern influence” on the Eldest’s House, including the “great hall with doors opening east and west.” Where do you think that particular architectural style came from, hmmm?

Starflower’s perspective on Foxbrush is very different from Leo’s. In the narrative focused on her point-of-view, Foxbrush is referred to as “faithful young Foxbrush.” NOT a description any narrative from Leo’s point-of-view would have used!

But whose perspective is more accurate? Leo’s or Starflower’s? Or are they both correct, but neither gathering the whole picture where poor, overshadowed Foxbrush is concerned?

These questions kept coming back to me the whole time I was writing and revising this draft. And pretty soon, the idea for a new novel was taking shape in my head. Perhaps there was more to oily-haired Foxbrush than meets the eye. Or perhaps not. Perhaps it’s merely our perspective that needs to change.

Glib lie: Leo certainly is adept at a quick lie. When his father asks why Rose Red wears veils, Leo immediately responds, “Birthmark. She’s embarrassed.”

Right. That’s what this is all about.


Questions on the text:

1. So at this point in the story, which character do you find yourself relating to most? And which character do you like the best (which is not necessarily the same answer)?

2. Considering the concerns of the nation, do you think Queen Starflower is right or wrong to be urging the alliance between Leo and Daylily? She knows her son needs a strong queen. Is Daylily, do you think, the right young woman for that job? Is she strong enough?

3. What did you think of Leo’s excuse for Rose Red’s veils? Convincing? Did you believe him even momentarily? At this point, what are your own guesses (or were your guesses) as to Rose Red’s secret?

4. Any favorite lines?


Heather wants to know: "Will there be another book with Eanrin and Imraldera as the main characters? Could we Eanrin and Imraldera fans have book about them?"

Well, they are my personal favorite characters in the series, so you'll definitely be seeing plenty more of them! They play major roles in Shadow Hand, though they aren't the main characters. And Eanrin is one of the major protagonists in Golden Daughter (book 7). Eanrin himself will continue to make important appearances and play major roles in just about all of the novels I have planned, and Imraldera will feature in most of them.

As to them being the primary protagonists . . . not for a while. I think they will play the leads again in one of the novels, but I'm not entirely certain which one or when yet. But like I said, they are my favorites, so I know they'll be back in lead roles again eventually.

Jemma wants to know: "I don't get two certain legends, one is that the Queen of Corrilond made the Red Desert and the other is that the Dragonwitch did it, I know they can't be the same, so which legend is true??"

Both are true!

The Dragonwitch destroyed Corrilond Green, turning it into desert. But a desert nation grew up from that and became the powerful kingdom (and, at least for a little while, empire) of Corrilond. The Bane of Corrilond destroyed Corrilond itself, poisoning all of its lands, destroying all of its great cities, and laying waste to all that had, over many centuries, grown up in power and strength. So the Red Desert was created by the Bane of Corrilond when she destroyed Corrilond, but the work was already begun by the Dragonwitch when she torched Corrilond Green. (This is one of the many reasons the Bane of Corrilond is considered, "like the Dragonwitch reborn," as Vahe says somewhere in Moonblood. The other reasons would include such things as the destruction of her own nation and people, similar to Hri Sora. But, of the two dragons, the Dragonwitch was by far the more powerful.)

We'll be learning much more about Corrilond by (I think) book 10, so some of its history will come to light then.

Fan Art:

Jemma drew another picture, this time to go with yesterday's chapter (chapter 6):

You're Bewitched!
This one depicts Leo standing up to Leanbear, Redbird, Foxbrush, and Daylily, with Rose Red and Beana at his back.

Thank you, Jemma!


Sarah Pennington said...

2. Queen Starflower has an excellent point. As he is now, Leo wouldn't really be a good king. He needs someone to keep him out of trouble. I'm not sure if Daylily would be the best choice, though she does seem good at 'managing' him.
3. Convincing? Yes, considering that his parents just met her and no one knows anything about her yet. If they'd known her longer, it might not be so quite convincing. Did I believe him? Not for a second.

I would very much like to know what Eanrin or Imraldera would think of that fountain. Though I think I can guess. xD

Unknown said...

Do you deliberately add themes to your books, or do they just sort of sneak in? And I agree with Sarah... has Imraldera seen that fountain? = P

Hannah said...

Heh, heh, I too wonder about the fountain. But I hear none of then actually look like her, so I don't suppose she'd be too offended. I guess she'd brush it off. And Eanrin...he'd either be highly amused or deeply insulted. And I wonder how he feels about being left out in the Legend of Starflower. Southlanders do not make a mention of him!

Meredith said...

1. I relate the most to Rose Red's character, especially her periods of isolation and feelings of inadequacy. I love her strength, even if it is misplaced at times. I definitely think I like her the best, although this read-along is enabling me to focus more on Daylily and glimpse her inner conflicts, a young woman torn between social duty and the desire to be herself. She's one of the most complex characters in the whole series since you can never quite interpret her motivations.

2. I think Starflower means well, and, like Sarah, I agree that at this point, Daylily would appear to be the most suitable match for Leo. At this stage, a trial by fire is needed to set all the character's on journeys to discover who they truly are. Definitely not something you like to happen to such wonderful people but something that must occur.

4. Lines: Don't forget that I love you. Don't forget my name.

Questions: I loved your observation about the starflower fountain and how the significance of the wood thrush had been forgotten over the years. In light of this fact, did you originally intend for Starflower's Guide to be the thrush, or was the thrush an embellishment added by storyteller's? Of course, the Wood Thrush and Hound are one and the same, but I just wondered how the Hound was overlooked?
Is there a possibility that Mousehand might have Faerie blood? I ask this because of something he tells Rose Red, that only Faerie eyes could see what she truly is.

Unknown said...

Also: how do you decide in what order to write your books, since they aren't in chronological order?

Anonymous said...

1. I don't acualy feel much like any of them at the moment, but my favorite charecter at this moment is Leo.

2.I don't think she is right in doing so and I don't think that Daylily is the right person either.

3. His exuse was OK, but no at the time I was not taken in, I thought she was some beutiful faeiri princess.

4."Birthmark, she's embaressed.

Having read Dragonwitch I am guessing(I can't actually remember) that the desgign is from the house of lights.


Ruth said...

1.I don't feel like any of them really,but I like Daylily.
2.I think Queen Starflower's right to urge the alliance between Leo and Daylily.I think Daylily's strong but not the right person.
3.Convincing enough but I didn't believe it for a second.

Anonymous said...

2. As long as Queen Starflower is urging and not forcing, I don't have a problem with it. Daylily may have strength but I don't think she's quite ready.

3. I didn't believe it for a nanosecond. I think the king and queen were a bit suspicious though.

- Heather

Anonymous said...

1. I think Rose Red and Beanna are my favorite characters in this book.

2. Maybe she's right. It could depend on where Daylily's loyalty lies on whether she's right or not.

3. No, not convincing. It was like he maybe had done it before. I'm thought I knew what she was.

4. "Did you think you were the only person on the mountain who wanted a friend? A friend who could see past names and titles and...and veils?" -pg. 160


Anonymous said...

Do you have any favorite lines for the chapter we're reading?


Therru Ghibli said...

1. I'm not sure who I related to, but I was really feeling bad for poor Foxbrush during this time!

2. Knowing Leo, she's probably right. He needs someone strong, as does the country. But she doesn't realize that Daylily won't make him happy.

3. I was beginning to guess that she was hiding her hideousness, but I wasn't sure.

I was wondering if you based each land and culture loosely off of a real country and culture? Or do you simply make it all up? I had thought Southlands loosely resembled Spain in location and certain other things, but it's unique and different enough to where I can't tell.

Anonymous said...

In pictures of Daylily and Imrelda they have white skin and the southlanders have brown skin, was this done on purpose or is it a mistake?


Becky said...

Ooooo, I love Meredith's question about Mousehand. I've wondered the same thing and have suspected we will learn more of him in another book. Is there a chance of this? Which reminds me of how I always melt when I see Erin's fan art, "What Mousehand Saw". (http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-_gCn9GnoUng/UIbXmQOJ5bI/AAAAAAAACSw/Q6PLGwFp24Q/s400/What+Mousehand+Saw+-+Erin+28.jpg)

Unknown said...

1. I think I probably relate the most to Leo. My favorite character, is probably Rose Red this far in.

2. When considering that I do think she's probably right to be urging the alliance - she's the sort of queen someone like Leo probably needs for when he takes the throne, and so far Daylily seems to be a good fit for that role.

3. Hehe, no, didn't believe him, but I think it was probably decently convincing for anyone who doesn't know all that much about the "Monster" tales and where she is from.

4. I liked "The queen’s gaze fixed upon her as an arrow to the mark. Rose Red shuddered; she felt as though that mighty lady could see right through her veils, down to the marrow of her soul. She bowed her head and curtsied deeply."

Anna said...

1. I've always liked Rose Red, as pitiful as she was at some parts. :) She was always so sweet, though. I don't know who I relate most to.

2. Queen Starflower is doing what she sees as best. I don't think she's necessarily wrong, but I feel bad for Leo feeling so obligated to marry Daylily. :) She's strong, but in sort of a weak way, if you know what I mean. She's got spunk and could carry the whole kingdom, if she needed to. But is that true strength?

3. Sounds like Leo. No, didn't believe him.