Still making my way through the murk of sickliness . . . but here I am with today's write-up! So close to the end now, we can almost taste it.
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the opening of this chapter, we see the Duke of Shippening, who has all along
been surprisingly cavalier with the Dragon, starting to questions the wisdom
of making bargains with such a mighty
ally. The problem with being allied with the devil is the devil lies.
Dragon follows his own code of conduct. But part of that code is a perfect
willingness to turn truth on its head or simply to burn it into nothing
whenever he sees fits.
Now bring Fidel
and his son. The
Duke is completely surprised to learn that he not only has King Fidel
imprisoned, but also Prince Felix . . . Prince Felix whom the duke has presumed
dead for many weeks now! I think the Dragon takes pleasure in watching the
duke--always so confident in his buffoonery--squirm.
Fidel and Felix are dragged up
from the dungeons, Felix very much alive and kicking! Fidel tries to bluff his
way out, claiming Felix isn't his son and telling the soldiers to let him go
unharmed. The Duke, knowing full well who Felix is, is about to slit Felix's
throat right there in front of Fidel and . . . .
. . . and I can't help wondering while reading this, WHERE is MONSTER? Surely
he's got to be nearby, still watching over Felix, even under the Dragon's nose!
I'm a little irked at the writer-me of years past for not bringing Monster into
this scene. It would have been a perfect heroic, if futile moment, for our
favorite blind cat.
well. I guess it wasn't meant to be.
seriously, writer-me of back then, you should think about these things!
moving on . . .
Dragon stops the duke from hurting Felix. He looks into Felix's eyes and sees
the dragon poison lurking deep inside. And he hints at the possibility of
transforming Felix even as he transformed Una.
No hurry. But the Dragon
has other plans to occupy his immediate future. He won't bother with Felix just
yet, but orders him and his father chained up in the yard. Meanwhile, he
intends to find Una wherever she fell and gnaw upon her bones.
really gave me the creeps, reading it years later. I'd forgotten about that
promise of his, and that he actually was setting out to do it. It's just . . . horrible. But that does make for a very
convincing villain in the end! He is the Death-in-Life, and he is the Destroyer
of Dreams and Devourer. He is truly the embodiment of evil.
Standing in the
before the Dragon can follow through with his evil intention, he is stopped by
a lone figure standing in his way. A figure the Dragon does not at first
have known since the beginning of this novel that the Dragon has been intent
upon wounding "his Enemy." And he focused on taking and transforming
Una because he knew that would be a wound that would cut his Enemy to the
quick! It is never overtly said who the Dragon's Enemy is, but it doesn't take
a whole lot of digging to realize that it's Aethelbald.
makes this moment all the more interesting, I think. If the Dragon hates his
Enemy so much that he would hunt down someone as insignificant as Una and wreck
all this havoc . . . don't you think he would recognize that Enemy when he sees
the Dragon says, "Do I know you? You seem familiar."
At the sound of
his voice, however,
the Dragon immediately recognizes the Prince of Farthestshore. But his reaction
is again not quite what you would expect. He laughs!
are you made up as?" he demands. "Look at you, pathetic creature, a
little man-beast! Never thought I'd see the day that you, my Enemy, would
reduce yourself to such a state."
now we know something new about our hero. This human form he wears as the
humble Prince Aethelbald is not his natural state. It is so unlike his true
state, in fact, that his bitterest enemy did not recognize him!
on the series, we glimpse the Prince of Farthestshore in other forms. But we do
not see him in the shape of a quiet, unobtrusive man until much later. I don't
believe he even went by the name "Aethelbald" until he came to woo
and win Una! But that's all information for another story at another time . . .
A history. The Dragon hints
at a great deal more history between him and the Prince as well. He speaks of
being bound to the Gold Stone (recall
the picture of the sleeper on the golden altar?) and of being stronger now than
he once was. The strife between these two goes back farther than we can know
from this one simple story.
A girl dressed
in white. Just
as the Dragon begins to taunt Aethelbald, telling him that his Beloved is lost
to him, Aethelbald steps to one side and reveals Una. Though the Dragon calls
out to her, "My daughter, my sister! You cannot live without your fire,
and I still hold your heart!" she is no longer his. Aethelbald has given
her his own heart so that she no longer needs the Dragon's fire to survive.
he will now claim her heart back from the Dragon.
Epic battle. We all knew it
was coming! We've been reading this book waiting for this moment! The moment when the Dragon and Aethelbald will fight
for the heart of Princess Una, a vicious and yet symbolic battle of Good and
Evil in the vein of all the classics we know and love, in the vein of the Great
Story that speaks to the truth of our hearts.
Awwwww. In the middle of all this tumult, even as he
makes ready to plunge into the inferno and battle his enemy, Aethelbald kisses
Una again and promises he will return for her. I had forgotten about that! It
actually made me go, "Awwww!" and maybe even a smidge of a fan-girl,
"Squeeeee!" It was very romantic. Usually Aethelbald gets shuffled
into such a tight corner of Christ-figure character that the romantic part
doesn't get any time to shine. But the fact is, this is an allegory that deals
with the symbol of the Church as the Bride of Christ. And that is a great
understand the Romance in part through the smaller-scale romance of love and
marriage. Which is why, I believe, so many girls get lost in romance novels and
bad relationships, because they're hunting for that big-scale Romance and don't
know quite what it means!
a balance in Heartless was tough.
Aethelbald is the Christ-figure, but he's also the romantic hero. And while he
is a type of Christ, he isn't supposed to be Christ himself, because this is another world, not our world. Some
people in reviews have been VERY uncomfortable with that storyline. And I am
sad about that. But personally, I do love the symbol, and I really enjoy how it
played out here.
the romantic in me really likes that moment where he kisses her before they both
plunge into danger: Aethelbald to fight he Dragon, Una to rescue her father and
a good moment for an illustration? Any of you talented artists out there?
Perhaps consider this for the fan art contest???)
Una heroic. Una finally gets
a good heroic scene in this chapter when she hastens across the burning
courtyard to liberate her father and brother from their chains. She grabs the
keys fallen from a soldier's hold and hurries to find the one that fits their
then the Duke of Shippening grabs her.
Felix heroic. Roaring like a
lion, Felix jumps on the Duke of Shippening, knocking him off his sister. Una
takes the moment to grab the keys again and manages to free her father. Fidel
then turns to face the duke, throwing his chains at the duke's face . . . a
good maneuver, I think! Turn what you have on
hand into a weapon.
then the Duke grabs Felix and is about to make an end of him.
Aethelbald takes hold of the duke's blade in his bare hand, pulling it out of
the duke's grasp and rescuing Felix . . . all setting up for one of the more
important symbols to come in the next chapter.
Just in time, Fidel grabs his
children and drags them behind the stone. Fire roars over them, filling all the
world. The duke screams for an instant, then his voice is cut off forever.
when the fire passes, Una jumps out and looks to where Aethelbald and the duke
were but moments ago. And she sees only charred bones.
1. The soft gold
melted at the touch of his hands, and the elegant curves sank into an unlovely
lump. He tossed it back to the pile with a smile. The shape was nothing, the
beauty unnecessary. All that matter was the gold. (p. 341)
2. His black cloak
billowed into black wings, and his body became long and sinewy and horrible by
the time he reached the broken gate. The men of Shippening scurried from his
path like so many cockroaches scuttling into safe nooks in the rubble of the
wall. (p. 343)
Questions on the
1. What do you
think it means when Aethelbald tells the Dragon that he has come to claim Una's
2. Given everything
that has happened, do you think it is still difficult for Una to trust
Aethelbald when he says he'll come back for her? Or do you think she is now
free of those doubts?
3. Favorite lines?
You know, Anne, it is so funny that you wondered where Monster was. I wondered that exact thing! I was like, where'd the knight go??? It would have been an awesome moment for Eanrin to switch into his man form and save Felix down in the dungeons, but then the Dragon would have sensed it and would have gone down to make an end of things, so things would have been turned bad anyway.
Oh well. Despite the epic possibilities of Eanrin's transformation in this scene, the way Felix DOES find out about Eanrin is hilarious.
Now for the questions:
1. He comes to combat the Dragon so that evil no longer has Una prisoner. In other words, he's fighting Una's battle to deliver her to freedom. As we shall see, the Dragon will try to keep stumbling Una but she no longer belongs to him.
2. I think Una no longer doubts that Aethelbald will return to her in any way possible. But the Dragon has shown so much might, she might wonder if there is a way possible. She is afraid that Aethelbald might lose the fight. After all...she never saw him practicing with Felix.
1) I think Aethelbald's claiming Una's heart is a symbol of what happens when one becomes a Christian--our hearts, once committed to the Devil, in a sense, are claimed by Christ instead. When God owns our hearts, he owns our souls. Aethelbald is taking Una's heart from the 'devil' and thereby freeing her from any lingering influence the Dragon might hold over her.
2) I think Una is renewed, reborn, in a sense. She went from being a princess of this world, to a dragon, and Aethelbald has transformed her into a princess of HIS world. And as such, I think she has been reborn into a sense of trust and peace. She understands Aethelbald now on a level she couldn't have before, and I think this frees her from her former doubts.
2. Hmm... Well I don't know... It is not like we always trust God even though he forgave us of our sins...
So she could still have problems...
Question: Is Una basically done from being placed in this series again? She just kind of fades out completely and I miss her. =X
1. Aethelbald means he's taking back Una's heart from the dragon when, well, when he says that. He's going to take Una's heart to replace his that he gave to Una.
2. When Aethelbald says he'll come back for Una, I believe it.
But now I put myself in Una's place. I would probably be a little doubtful but I'd believe in him.
So I read the others comments after I wrote my answers....now my answers seem so pitiful! :P
Also, if it's alright to ask (spoilers for others, perhaps?), is Una or for that matter, Felix, at all mentioned in Dragonwitch?
Or are you going to make me wait and find out? Hee hee, if it were me, I'd choose the latter.
Not that I'm giving any SUGGESTIONS, no no. ;) :P
1. I agree with Beka. The Dragon has no more hold over her.
2. No. I think Una is now free of doubts to trust Aethelbald.
3. "You!" he cried, his eyes narrowing to two red slits. "What are you made up as? Look at you, pathetic creature, a little man-beast! Never thought I'd see the day that you, my Enemy, would reduce yourself to such a state. You, who walk where mortals cannot; you, who bound me to the Gold Stone. Why, I could snap you up in a mouthful and still be hungry for dessert!"
"You are wrong, Death-in-Life," the Prince said.
Now that's it's been mentioned, yeah it's weird that Eanrin isn't in this chapter. But if he couldn't face the Dragon before when Una was captured, who's to say he could help Felix and Fidel? He probably decided to trust his Prince to work everything out.
1. What Beka said.
2. What Beka said. Hey, she pretty much answered for me! =P
3. "I have given her my heart. She no longer needs your fire to live. But I have come now to claim her heart from you. It is mine now by right!" (pg. 344)
Prince Aethelbald: The man of the hour! (I was originally gonna go with "The man with the plan", but that just sounds a bit weird. =P )
He gazed into her eyes a moment, then suddenly drew her close and kissed her, even as the air boiled and the heavens roared. (pg. 345)
2. I think Una trusts Aethelbald completely now. He's the only one who has truly kept any of his promises to her.
1. Aethelbald's taking back of Una's heart means that he has transformed her. In submitting to Aethelbald, Una allowed the prince to gain all rights to her. Therefore, the Dragon King no longer has a legitimate right to hold her heart captive.
I was surprised by your discussion of some reviewers inability to reconcile Aethelbald as a Christ figure with his romantic actions toward Una. Christ is the most romantic figure of all time! I do relate to the difficulty of balancing a Christ figure with a particular story ark. It's impossible to include every aspect of Jesus' character in a story because He simply cannot be contained. Isn't it amazing that Christ Himself used parables to explain difficult concepts? All metaphors eventually break down, but the object of fiction is to hopefully point people toward the True Word of God. I definitely think you've done that. Thanks so much.
1. so that the Dragon cannot have any sway over her again, down the road, maybe? Because her heart is rightfully his, so he will fight for it.
2. I think Una is free of those doubts.
so many good ones. :-)
2)I love the whole, "Do I know you?"
"We have met." scene.
So we can assume the Duke is dead, I suppose.
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