Once upon a time, there was Goldstone
Wood, and it is still here today. The Wood was there when Parumvir was just a
collection of squabbling duchies, and it has remained through centuries of
kings, conquerors, wars, and progress. It has outlasted even the legends said
to take place within and around its borders. The stories of Maid Starflower,
Bard Eanrin, the Dragonwitch, Akilun and Etanun, Princess Una, Prince
Lionheart, Lady Daylily, and even the Prince of Farthestshore himself have all
faded from memory, been regulated to myth or religion, or been stripped of
anything mildly fantastic and stuffed into history books.
But Goldstone Wood remains, and even
today, no one ventures far inside. No one crosses the stream or the bridge that
arches over it. And though no one will admit it, all know what holds them back.
Somewhere deep inside, all fear that the legends might be true, that history
left things out, and that myth and religion are not as far-off as they’d like.
But sometimes no one
isn’t everyone. Sometimes a brave soul will come along who
doesn’t fear the legends as much as others. Sometimes he or she will stand on
the edge of the stream dividing Near and Far, look at the Wood beyond, and hear
the call to more than the ordinary. Sometimes he or she will answer.
And that is where our story really
begins.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The
girl’s violin sang alone in the stillness of Goldstone Wood, as it had every
day of the past week. The notes flowed off the instrument and lingered over the
quiet waters of the stream. Then they flew away to be lost among the trees.
The
girl, Helen, stopped playing and lowered her violin with a sigh. She flopped to
the ground under a wide oak. “It’s no good,” she muttered to herself. “It’s
just not right.”
She
stared dismally across the stream to the Wood itself. It seemed to wait there,
so close and yet so far away, like the song she was trying to capture in the
strings of her violin. She knew the melody; she felt it somewhere deep within
herself. Yet whenever she tried to play it, the notes simply wouldn’t come as
they should.
With
another sigh, she began to pack away her violin. “Why can’t I play it right?
Why, when I can play anything else, if I practice it? I know this one better than any of those others.”
Helen
finished putting away her violin and stood, dusting leaves and pine needles
from her long, brown skirt. The debris seemed to cling to the sturdy material,
and she quickly resorted to picking up the largest bits and hoping no one would
notice the rest when she returned home. She was about to turn away when the
silvery notes of a birdsong dropped to her ears.
Helen
turned back towards the sound in wonder. She never heard birds in this part of
the Wood, and this song was not like any she had ever heard elsewhere. It was
sweeter, purer, almost matching the song Helen could never grasp. And as she
listened, she thought she heard words among the notes, though no human voice
could have sung them.
“Beyond
the Final Water falling,
The
Songs of Spheres recalling,
When
the music calls your heart to more,
Won’t
you follow me?”
The
song faded from Hellen’s ears but lingered in her mind. She stared into the far
side of the Wood, searching for the bird that had sung it- if it was a bird.
Stories said that strange creatures lurked in the Wood. Surely those stories
weren’t real, but no simple songbird sang quite like that.
Won’t you follow me? The song seemed to
call to her, ask her to- to do what? Whatever it was, she probably shouldn’t
listen. It was her imagination, logic told her, or a trap, Haven teachings
said. You didn’t follow mysterious birdsong or anything else into the Wood, and
that was that.
Yet
Ellen did not move to leave.
A
wind sprang up and blew past her out of the deepness of the Far Wood. It
carried with it the scent of secrets, waiting patiently to be rediscovered. And
it held a whisper of the song she’d just heard.
Won’t you follow me?
Helen
slung the strap of her violin case over her shoulder and started walking, not
back towards her home, but upstream, towards the bridge she knew was there. She
needed to find out where that song
came from. Surely it couldn’t hurt to just cross the stream and have a quick
look around?
Halfway
to the bridge, she paused, recalling something else she’d heard at multiple
Havenmeets: “If you must enter the Far
Wood, ford the stream but step not on the Old Bridge.” No one had ever been
able to give her a proper answer as to the why of that warning, but Helen
decided to heed it anyway, just in case.
Lifting her skirt, she
scrambled down the stream bank and made her way across the stream. At this
point, there were a few stepping stones, enough for her to make it across
without completely drenching her shoes. She reached the far bank and paused.
Some instinct, long buried but still there, warned her to turn back.
Helen shook herself,
recalling her thoughts from earlier: just
a quick look around couldn’t hurt. Carefully, she stepped onto the far
bank.
Immediately, Helen
realized that she’d done something far more significant than cross a stream.
She first noticed the change in the light: where it had been cloudy, now bright
sunshine filtered though the leaves. The forest itself was different as well:
thick pines rather than spreading oaks and silver birch. And where there had
been decay, fallen leaves and rotting branches, here the ground was clear of
such debris, though not of underbrush.
Helen shivered. Perhaps the stories were truer than I
thought. She glanced over her shoulder. The stream remained, though the
wood on the far side looked like that which she was in now. Surely crossing
back over the stream would return her to her own wood? If so, I have no reason at all to worry.
Straightening her
shoulders and clasping the strap of her violin case, Helen called out a
cautious, “Hello?” No answer came.
She glanced over her
shoulder again, weighing the merits of going back. But, no. She was here. She’d
have her look around. Besides, she was one of the Haven- didn’t that mean she
was protected? “’For He makes Paths in the wilderness for his people,’” she
muttered, recalling one of the many verses pounded into her over the course of
her seventeen years, “’and watches their every step.’ That sounds like
protection to me.”
Admittedly, the words
of a centuries-old book, even one claimed to be infallible, weren’t entirely
comforting when one was in a mysterious Wood and possibly in another world as
well. Helen hesitated, wondering if, protection or not, it wouldn’t be better
to turn around? But then she heard once again the silvery song that had called
her over here.
“Beyond
the Final Water falling,
The
Songs of Spheres recalling,
When
doubts shadows every thought,
Won’t
you follow me?”
And
that was all she needed. Without another thought, Helen set off in the
direction of the song. Oddly, though she’d gone in the direction where the
trees and underbrush were thickest, there always seemed to be a clear space for
her to walk. Every now and then she heard the notes of the song once again, and
they pulled her onward, deeper and deeper into the Wood.
As
she walked, Helen noticed an uncomfortable sensation: as the trees passed into
the corners of her eyes, they seemed to blur somehow. What was it that she’d
been told in both childhood stories and Havenmeet lessons? In the Far Wood, a
single step could take you a thousand leagues? Or was that only with certain
boots? She couldn’t recall for sure.
She
noticed something else as well: she seemed to be passing certain landmarks over
and over. Surely she’d seen that oak with the gap in its trunk at least twice
by now? And that lion’s-head rock, she felt certain she’d passed three times or
more by now. Was she just going in circles?
Yet
the song still led her onward.
The
Wood began to grow darker. The ground beneath her feet became rougher and
steeper, and Helen stumbled often. She paused to catch her breath, leaning
against an old, gnarled tree. “If this is a path,” she muttered, “it’s not much
of one.”
She
glanced over her shoulder, and her fingers clenched in fear around the strap
over her shoulder. Whatever trail or path she had followed up here was gone;
behind her was only a dense mass of trees and underbrush, obviously too thick
to push through. And from among the trees glinted bright eyes. Red eyes.
Song
and weariness forgotten, Helen took off running. Branches caught at her skirt
and blouse now, as if trying to hold her back. She tore past them, heedless.
Was that a howl she’d just heard behind her? She didn’t dare wait and find out.
She just kept on as fast as she could, scrambling, tripping, running.
Then
a pit opened before her feet.
Helen
heard herself scream. She backpedaled furiously, falling over backwards in her
haste. She tumbled a few feet, her violin case smacking against her.
She
lay where she’d stopped for several moments, gasping for breath. Then, with a
glance back, she pushed herself to her feet and took off once more, this time
away from the pit. She had to get away- had to get out of the Wood- had to get
home-
Helen
stumbled again, this time on a downhill slope. She tumbled some distance before
a thornbush caught her. Spikes dug through the thin fabric of her blouse and
into her skin and held her thick skirt fast. She struggled to free herself but
only succeeded in tangling herself more in the branches and the strap still
somehow slung across her chest. She thought she could hear the sound of footsteps
running towards her.
And
then they passed her, and after them came deeper darkness than before. Before
long, all sound faded, but that pure midnight blackness remained.
Helen
finally managed to untangle and unstuck herself. She tumbled out of the thornbush
and lay, facedown, on the ground, cheek pressed into the dirt. She was dead. Or
about to die. Or going to wander lost in the Wood for eternity. All three came
out to about the same thing, didn’t they?
“Dragon’s
teeth,” she muttered, “why did I come in here? No song could be worth this.”
She
pushed herself to a sitting position. If she was going to die, she refused to
do it sprawled on the ground like she had been. And now that she thought about
it, wandering lost in the wood for all eternity sounded a bit more attractive
than death. After all, if she was lost, there was always the chance she’d be
found.
Helen
looked around, trying to decide in which direction to wander. With the darkness
lurking between each tree, the Wood seemed more foreboding than ever. The
absolute silence didn’t help; for some reason, Helen couldn’t help filling it
with images of strange creatures lurking ever just behind her, ready to pounce.
Desperately,
she tried to recall anything she’d ever heard about the Wood and what one did
when one was lost there. Surely she’d learned something? The Wood came up every
week in Havenmeet, in every children’s story-
But
all she could remember was another of the verses she’d been forced to memorize:
“Call on the Prince and He will answer.
Seek and you will find. Ask and so you will receive.”
Well,
it was better than nothing. “Um,” Helen said aloud, wondering how one called on
the Prince in a situation like this. Prayers to Him (and all other religious
figures) were generally reserved for Havenmeets and mealtimes, and Helen
herself rarely said them. When she did, she usually just parroted what her
elders would’ve said. But none of those words seemed appropriate now.
“Um
. . .” She tried again. “Oh, Prince of Farthestshore, hear this prayer of your
humble servant. Do not abandon me in my hour of need, when I am lost and
wandering. Give me a Path or a guide to lead me home.”
She
didn’t really expect much of a response, so she wasn’t very disappointed when
the midnight didn’t lift, no hero appeared, and no Path spread out before her.
She just sighed and carefully moved so she could at least sit with her back
against a tree. Maybe once daylight returned, she could find her way out.
So
she sat and hummed to herself and wondered why she’d thought a song was worth
entering the Wood for. It had been a beautiful song, she admitted, but that was
no reason to go gallivanting off into the unknown as she had.
Eventually,
Helen thought that the blackness seemed to be lifting. When she could see five
trees away, she stood up. Picking a direction she thought might take her in the
general direction of home, she set off.
“You
know, that’s not a very nice Path to go down.”
Helen
whirled around in midstep. “What?” She spotted the speaker at once, a
dark-skinned man in a green cloak. “Who-?”
The
man, who’d been leaning against a tree, straightened and smiled at her. “Not
that you’re not free to go down any Path you like, but you do look rather lost,
and you probably don’t want to wander into the Burning Lands. Scratch that, you
definitely don’t want to wander into
the Burning Lands. I ought to know.”
He
covered the distance between them in three quick strides. “But, since you don’t want to go to the Burning Lands, I
assume, where are you headed? Not that it’s any of my business, but as I said,
you look lost.”
“Um
. . .” Helen glanced behind her, then at the stranger. One thing about the Wood
she recalled very clearly: you shouldn’t trust everyone you meet in it.
“You
don’t need to tell me,” the man said. “As I said, it’s not my business. All the
same, if you are lost, I might be able to help. I do know something about
finding my way in this place, whatever Eanrin might say.”
Helen
blinked. “Wait. Eanrin?” Eanrin was
decidedly not real, assuming this man meant the bard of fairy tale fame. At
best, that Eanrin was exaggerated. At worst, he was completely made up.
But
the man nodded. “Bard Eanrin. Out of curiosity, do they still play his songs in
the Near World these days?”
“Um.
A few? Not many.” As a rule, Eanrin’s love poetry had passed out of fashion
well over a century ago, unless you were a lovesick young man trying to impress
a girl. “Eanrin isn’t . . . He’s not . . .” She trailed off. This was the Wood.
Who knew what was and wasn’t real?
The
man burst out laughing. “Really? They finally gave up on it? Wait until I tell
him that!”
“Yes?”
Helen decided not to pursue the Eanrin subject. “So who are you?”
“I?”
The man clapped a hand to his heart. “Pardon me, fair lady, for my gross breach
of etiquette in failing to introduce myself.” He dramatically fell to one knee
before her. “I am Lionheart, knight of Farthestshore. At your service, maiden.
And you are . . .?”
“Helen.”
Perhaps she shouldn’t have said that, but if he was a knight of Farthestshore,
surely he could be trusted. Couldn’t he?
“A
pleasure to meet you, Maid Helen.” Lionheart stood. “Now, since we aren’t
complete strangers, maybe we can go back to my original question: where are you
headed?” He winked. “Don’t worry. Knights of Farthestshore don’t lead people
off in the wrong direction.”
Helen
gaped. “Did you just read my mind?”
For
a moment, Lionheart looked alarmed. Then he laughed. “No. I’ve been lost in the
Wood before as well. That was before I became a knight, though. So, will you
trust me?”
Helen
hesitated a moment longer. Then she nodded. “Yes. I’m trying to get home-
Sondhold. In Parumvir.”
“Easy
enough.” Lionheart looked around and then set off in what seemed to be a random
direction. “Keep up. If you get off the Path, it won’t end well.”
Helen
hurried after him. “Are you sure this is the way?”
“Positive.”
He grinned at her. “Knights of Farthestshore don’t lead people off in the wrong
direction, remember?”
“Well,
yes.” Helen couldn’t help smiling back. “But I thought that a Path would be a
bit easier to see, at least once you were on it.”
“Only
if you know what to look for.” Lionheart strode on. “So what brought you into
the Wood, Maid Helen? Running from something? Looking for someone?”
“No.
Nothing like that. I . . .” Helen sighed. This knight was sure to think she was
crazy, running into the Wood after birdsong. “It’s pretty stupid.”
“As
a self-professed Fool, I know all about stupid. Go on.”
This
wasn’t exactly comforting, as this man was supposed to be a knight of
Farthestshore and her guide to boot. Helen went on anyway, feeling her face
grow warmer with every word. “Well . . .” she patted the violin case at her
side, thankful it had remained whole though all this escapade. “I play the
violin, if you can’t guess, and there’s this song . . . I don’t really know how
to explain it, but it’s like I hear it and know it somewhere inside, though I can’t play it at all.
And I was out practicing in the Near Wood- it’s nice and quiet and private
there- and I heard . . .” She paused, wishing for a way to make this part sound
just a little less silly. “I heard a bird singing that song. It was like it was
calling me. So I followed the song across the stream and into the Wood and,
well . . . stuff happened.” She looked down at her fingers wrapped around the
strap on her case. “Like I said, stupid.”
But
Lionheart shook his head. “Not as stupid as you think.”
Helen
frowned. “Why not? I wandered into the Far Wood after a birdsong. ‘Stupid’ is
probably generous . . . That goes against just about everything I ever learned
at Havenmeet.”
Lionheart
had obviously been about to say something, but at the last moment, his
expression creased into something between worry and confusion. “Havenmeet?”
Helen
stopped walking. Wouldn’t a knight of
Farthestshore know about the Haven? “You sound confused.”
“I
am.” Lionheart stopped as well and turned to face her. “What’s this Havenmeet,
and what does it have to do with the Wood?”
“Havenmeet.
It’s when Haven members, well, meet.” Helen wondered if she should run, but she
had no idea where to run to. “Don’t you know about the Havens?”
“I
know about the Haven, singular, and I’m fairly sure it’s not the same as
whatever you’re talking about. Maybe you should explain.”
How
did one explain what the Havens were? Everyone Helen had met knew, even if they
didn’t go to one. “The Havens . . . they’re where followers of the Prince
gather for worship once a week. We sing, a priest gives a message . . .” She
trailed off, trying to figure out what else she could say.
Apparently
she’d said enough, because Lionheart nodded slowly in understanding. “Ah. Now I
remember. I visited one of those, well, some time ago.” A sheepish smile
crossed his face. “I haven’t been to the Near World much lately, if you can’t
tell.” He started walking again. “I didn’t expect a religion around the Prince
to catch on, though. In my experience, humans tend to reject Him.”
Helen
hurried after him. “He killed the Dragon, died, and yet lives still. When we
see Him for who He is, why not worship?”
“That,
I’ll admit, is an excellent point.” Lionheart fell silent, his expression
returning to perplexed.
Helen
waited for him to say something else. When he didn’t for some time, she asked,
“Is something wrong?”
“Maybe,
maybe not.” Lionheart ran a hand through his hair. “Look, it’s hardly my place
to judge, considering how little I know about these Havens, but the idea seems
off to me. The Prince isn’t supposed to be a religion. He’s more than that.”
Now
it was Helen’s turn to be perplexed. “But we’re supposed to follow the Prince,
aren’t we?”
“Definitely,”
Lionheart replied. “The thing is, I’m not sure that building a religion around
the Prince is the same thing as following Him. Religions, in my experience, are
more ritual and rules than life. But when you follow the Prince, it effects
everything in your life.” He grimaced. “I’m not the one to ask about it,
probably. Dame Imraldera could explain it better.”
Helen
chewed on her lip, considering what Lionheart had said. “So you’re saying the
Havens are wrong?”
“No.”
Lionheart shook his head. “Wrong’s a
bit too strong. I mean, people learning about the Prince is good. I just
wonder, how many people at these Havens actually live for the Prince?”
His
words struck closer to home than Helen wanted to admit. Did she live for the
Prince? No. I don’t. He’s right.
Haven was, for her, just what he’d said it was: ritual and rules to follow so
she could feel like she was doing right. “You’re right,” she said quietly. “But
it’s hard to live for someone you don’t know, and how am I supposed to know the
Prince if I’ve never met him?”
“That’s
a question I can’t answer.” Lionheart’s face was grave; it did not seem to be
an expression he was used to. “I expect there’s a way, though. I’ve heard that
there were some, long ago, who heard of the Prince from the Brothers Ashuin and
followed Him because of that.”
“Hmm.”
Helen could think of nothing else to say now. She walked on beside Lionheart in
silence, thinking over his words and wondering how in the world she could
change. Did she really want to? Her life was comfortable; did she dare lose
that?
Comfortable and empty. It was like her
music: the songs she knew just weren’t enough. She wanted something more, that
one song she couldn’t quite play.
Thinking
of that song brought a question to Helen’s mind. “Sir Lionheart? The song I
mentioned, the one I followed in here . . . do you know anything about whatever
it might be?”
“I
have an idea.” Lionheart glanced over his shoulder, then up into the branches
of the trees they passed. “Let me know if you hear it again.”
“I
will.” Helen sighed, realizing that Lionheart probably wasn’t going to reveal
anything more about what he might or might not know. Why not? Probably he didn’t want to make predictions without
knowing more. She wished she could hear the song again. She could imagine the
melody, but as always, her recreation fell short of the real thing.
Then,
suddenly, as if responding to her wish, the first notes of the song fell from
the trees to her left. Helen stopped short, turning towards the sound.
“Beyond
the Final Water falling,”
The
Song of Spheres recalling,
When
your heart yearns for something more,
Won’t
you follow me?”
“Sir
Lionheart?” Helen breathed out the words, barely thinking about them. “I hear
it again. The song.” Just as before, it seemed to call to her. Almost without
thinking, she took a step after it.
Lionheart
stopped just behind her. “Where?”
“You
can’t hear it?” Doubt assailed Helen. What if this was a trick? Things in the Wood are rarely what they seem
. . .
“No.”
Lionheart paused. He stepped forward, staring intently at the ground at her
feet. “But I think I know what it is all the same. Lead the way, and I’ll
follow.”
Helen
hesitated, just a moment. Dare I? After
what happened before? But Lionheart said go on, and her heart said go on,
and so she did. She plunged off whatever Path they’d been following, into the
trees. Oddly, though she’d left the Path and though the forest had seemed thick
a moment ago, there always seemed to be an opening before her and a way through
trees and underbrush. So she raced on after the Song.
As
she traveled, the Wood grew darker. Rocks appeared beneath her feet, and she
stumbled now and then. Lionheart fell behind, though she did not notice. Still
the Song guided her on, and she followed, determined not to lose it this time.
Suddenly,
the ground beneath her dropped steeply downward in a rocky gorge. Helen stopped
at its edge, peering ahead in search of a path. She could see none, just
sharp-edged stones and hulking boulders. She bit her lip. Should I look for another way? No. The Song hadn’t guided her wrong
before; she hadn’t become lost until she turned aside. I won’t make that mistake again.
Taking
a deep breath, Helen began the scramble down into the gorge. As before, a path
seemed to open before her feet, guiding her down the steep slope. She reached
the bottom of the gorge safely and still the Song led her onward, through the
rocks and boulders. The walls of the gorge grew steeper on either side of her
until they seemed to close in around her, but she forced herself to ignore them
and to focus on the Song.
She
stepped through a narrow spot where the rocks seemed to almost join over her
head. Then, suddenly, she was no longer in the gorge or in the Wood at all. She
stood on a rocky plain beneath a star-filled sky. The Song she’d been following
faded away. And she was alone.
Helen
clutched her violin case and shivered. “Hello?” she called, though she could
see no one. “Is anyone here?”
A
rustle of wings brushed her ears. She turned to see a thrush alight on a pillar
of rock, looking out of place in this barren world. It spoke in a familiar silvery voice. “I’ve
been waiting for you.”
Helen
stared. “You were the one singing the Song, weren’t you? The one who led me
here?”
“I
am the Giver of Songs,” the thrust replied seriously. “I did lead you here.”
“Why?”
Halen asked. It occurred to her that she should feel far more ridiculous than
she did, talking to a bird. At the moment, she was too curious to really care.
“You
have forgotten me.” The thrush sounded so melancholy that Helen thought her own
heart would break for it. “All your people have.”
Helen
frowned, puzzling over this piece of information. “Do I know you?”
“You
have admitted that you do not, though you have claimed to in the past. You have
forgotten me and the songs I gave.” The bird fluttered its wings. “Long ago,
many heard my song and followed my Paths. Now even those who claim to serve me
no longer listen.”
“I
listen!” Helen bit her lip, realizing that wasn’t entirely true. “Sometimes. I
try to. I’ve tried to play your song, but it never comes out right.”
“You
cannot play my song without my help.”
“But
I’ve never met you before!” Helen shook her head. “I don’t even know who you
are. Won’t you tell me?”
“I
am the Giver of Songs,” said the thrush, as it had before. “I know you, Helen,
though you do not know me.”
Something
clicked in Helen’s mind. She gasped. “You’re Him. The Prince. The Defeater of the Dragon.” She sank to her
knees.
“I
am.” The thrush was suddenly no longer a thrush but a man standing before
Helen. His face was gentle, though she didn’t dare look him in the eye.
“I’m
sorry.” The words didn’t seem like enough to fill the measure by which she’d
been found wanting. The Prince she claimed to serve had called to her, and she
hadn’t recognized Him! She struggled for words. “I- I want to know you and
follow you. I want to hear your song always- to play it, if I can. Will you
help me?”
“I
will.” The Prince took her hands and gently raised her to her feet. “Would you
like to hear my Song as it was meant to be?”
Helen
nodded, though she wondered what could make the Song better than it had been. A
moment later, her question was answered as the Song burst from above, melody
and harmony intertwining and swelling as if to fill the entire world. Helen
gasped, overcome by wonder and a yearning to join the Song somehow. At the same
time, however, the beauty of the Song crushed her. How could she, a dust-bound
mortal, hope to play anything so wonderful?
“Only
through me can you hope to succeed,” the Prince said. “Do you still desire to
try?”
“Yes!”
Helen turned to face him. She hastily removed her violin and bow from their
case, hands trembling in excitement. “Please! I . . . I think I’ll die without
it.” It sounded to her ears like an exaggeration, but in her heart it rang
true. Some part of her would indeed die without the Prince’s Song.
The
Prince moved so he stood behind her. “Then let me guide your hands and I will
teach you.”
She
let him. At first he held her hands, showing her fingers where to press down
and where to stroke the bow across the strings. Then he let go, but she could
still feel him guiding her somehow, just as his Path had guided her steps. And
sooner than she expected, the small voice of her violin joined the larger
chorus around her.
At
last the Song faded, though Helen played on for a few more minutes. Then she
lowered her violin and knelt before the Prince once more. “Thank you.”
“Thank
you for listening.” The Prince set his hand on her shoulder. “You followed me
into the Wood, Helen. Will you still follow me in your own world and walk the
Path I have given you?”
Helen
nodded. “As long as you guide me, I’ll follow.” She wasn’t sure how she’d know
the Path, but surely she could learn.
The
Prince touched her violin. “And will you carry my Song to your people and
remind them of me?”
Helen
nodded again, more firmly than before. How could she not? Her heart yearned to
play again, to share the Song with others. “Of course.”
“It
will not be easy,” the Prince warned. “Here you speak with me face to face and
hear my Song clearly. In your own world, your Path will often be clouded, and
many things will try to drown out my voice and my Song.”
“I’ll
still follow, as long as you will guide me,” Helen promised.
“Good.”
The Prince smiled and gestured for her to rise. “Now, my knight Lionheart is
looking for you. He will see you home. Do not forget what you have heard here,
Helen Songbearer.”
Songbearer. She had never heard that
name before, but it felt right. “Will you come as well.”
“I
am always with you,” he replied. “Though you may not always know it. Walk my
Path and call on me when you are in need. I will always answer.”
“All
right.” Helen placed her bow and violin back in their case and slung the strap
over her shoulder once more. She bowed one last time to her Prince. Then she
set off back to Lionheart and the Wood and her world, carrying the Song with
her.
VOTING: If you would like to vote on this or any of the other fan fiction submissions, email your top three titles to me at aestengl@gmail.com. Voting is for fans of the Goldstone Wood series only.
11 comments:
Go Helen! Great job, Sarah!
I loved that Helen plays the violen. That's my absolute favorite instrument. So neat that this tory is set in Goldstone Wood's future, and I loved your message that "religion" isn't the same as truly following the prince. Fantastic work.
modern Goldstone! A really good story, like Meredith I like your message about following the Prince not being the same as religion.
Jemma
Very nice imagining of a modern girl in Goldstone Wood! :)
You people are writing too many good stories. How ever am I to choose THREE?
This was wonderful, Sarah. (Personally, I would have taken the moderness a bit farther, such as having Helen wearing trousers or something, but don't mind me.) This is so true. Following the Prince has to be more than a religon. Fabulously done.
This was a fun read! :)
@Allison: Thank you!
@Meredith: Thank you very much! I'd been wanting to write a story about the future of Goldstone Wood for a while, so I had a lot of fun with this.
@Anonymous: Thank you very much!
@Hannah: Thank you!
@Ghost Ryter: Thank you! And I know, right? Everyone is so creative; deciding who to vote for is going to be almost impossible. (Thanks for the suggestion. In the first versions of this, she was wearing basically jeans, but I ended up deciding to set the fashion a period or two back. Oh well.)
@Clara: Thank you!
Great modern twist!
Hmm...was the Prince, perchance, echoing the words of his Narnian counterpart? :D
Excellent job!
-Merenwen
Ah, how true that our life can be comfortable and empty when we become focused on religion and forget the One we follow. Thank you, Sarah, for this reminder that He is our life, not just a part of it.
Beautifully told, Sarah! I think we all get distracted sometimes, and our worship can become empty gestures if we just follow the rituals and forget the One it's really all about. And what a unique concept, to explore Goldstone in a very modern age. I loved it!
Fabulous, darling! I adored your concept and your setting so immensely much!! The idea of setting it in the future was fantastic, and your message was absolutely amazing. I also love how you gave Helen some distinguishing features, like her violin, that really make us get a sense for her character. I love it, well done!!
Blessings,
Melanie
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