Thursday, December 20, 2012

Read-along: Chapter 19

A quick apology to all of you patient readers and commentators: So sorry for not answering all of your most excellent questions these last few days! I do hope to catch up on them soon, but alas, life at Rooglewood has been a little extra busy this last week, and I'm doing good to keep up with the read-along itself. Maybe this weekend I'll get a chance to catch up on them. Do be patient with me!

And continue to comment and leave questions. There will be three winners of books drawn at the end of the week!

CHAPTER NINETEEN

Poor Felix. As soon as prince arrives safely in Dompstead, he is separated from both his father and Monster! His father is whisked away to be treated for dragon-poison, and Monster leaps from his shoulders and vanishes into the night. Now we, of course, knowing that Monster is also Sir Eanrin, a knight of Farthestshore, probably figure he's off to attend to his knightly duties. But as far as Felix knows, it's just his sister's pet cat, running away into the unknown night. I think how I would feel if one of my darling pets ran off into the night like that! After all the rest of the stress and terror of that evening, I think that would just be the final straw. I'd probably poke out the eye of anyone who tried to stop me from following him!

Felix, however, allows himself to be dragged away into the fort.

Captain Janus. The only person who shows Felix any consideration is the young officer, Captain Janus, who brings him a stool to sit on as Felix waits outside his father's sickroom door. Keep an eye on that Captain Janus . . . he'll come back into the story in another chapter or two . . . .

Dragon Poison. After a long night of waiting, Felix learns that they are treating his father for dragon poisoning. His father did have a much closer encounter with the Dragon than most of those in the palace, including their tussle at the dinner table. Whatever amount he breathed in is dealing harshly inside him.

Can you imagine how badly poisoned Una must be by this time if Fidel is suffering so after so brief an encounter?

Irony. I do think it's pretty funny when Felix considers Bard Eanrin, who wrote The Bane of Corrilond epic poem. Bard Eanrin whom Felix had just carried draped over his shoulder that night! HA!

And yet another reference to the Bane of Corrilond. You can bet she's going to be important!

Fidel's gruffness. Yet again, Fidel is surprisingly rough with his son. When he comes to from his poison-induced state, he immediately demands to know where General Argus is and sends Felix off to find him. He states later on in the next scene that he sent Felix away to distract him, knowing that the boy had probably been sitting outside his door, stewing all night. But it still comes across very gruff! I wonder if that might have something to do with the poison. Or just simply Fidel's fear in this dreadful situation. I can't blame him, but I do wish he would be a little gentler on the boy . . .

Out of the Wood. We learn in the scene between Fidel and Argus that Shippening's army came out of Goldstone Wood itself! This should be impossible. Shippening is far south of Parumvir, and an army that size should have been spotted long before it could have reached Goldstone Wood. But somehow, the duke and his men crossed unnoticed.

It can only be by evil magic.

He warned me. Fidel's mind is full of the warnings with which Prince Aethelbald left him. And when Argus suggests that Una might already have perished,  Fidel answers with the dreadful comment, "That would be almost too much to hope for."

Foreshadowing!!!

A tiny scene. That short little scene with Una was another one from the original manuscript. If I wrote the book now, I probably wouldn't have included it, figuring that it interrupted the narrative of Fidel and Felix. But you know, that's one of the reasons I'm glad that I didn't write the book now. While I am a better writer now than I was at age 21--sounder at narrative construction, etc.--I think some of my natural instincts as a less-experienced writer worked well here. This short little scene with Una, following on the heels of her father's cryptic comments, is rather haunting. The imagery of her, hollow-eyed as she brushes her hair and tells herself that Leonard hasn't forgotten her . . . well, it's actually quite spooky! And I like it.

All that to say, you writers out there who cringe at your old work, don't be hard on your former writer-self. Yes, we grow in our craft. And we improve. But sometimes those untutored instincts are more real and raw than the polish we achieve later on. Sometimes. Not always. But sometimes.

Worth. Una asks herself, "How can I be worthy of his love if I do not trust him now?" She's thinking of Leonard, of course. But the whole theme of worth is an important one in Una's story. Earlier, she wondered if she wasn't "worth" Gervais's love. And now, she's determined to prove her own worth to herself when it comes to Prince Lionheart's love.

But, given what is to come, we all know that Una ultimately cannot prove worthy. No matter how she might try.

Felix is sent north. I appreciate that Felix tried to find Monster! I feel so bad for the forlorn young prince, pushed around and ignored in the midst of all these great doings. He's not old enough to be counted part of battle plans, but he's important enough to be hastened off to safety. The poor boy must be completely overwhelmed and worried sick about his sister! So he tries to find Monster and can't even succeed in that. I really feel for Felix in this scene.

My Personal Favorite Line:

1. Yet he neither died nor turned evil but was a hero who figured in a hundred tales, most of which he had written. (p. 195) LOL. Ah, Eanrin, how we love you . . . 

Questions on the Text

1. When Fidel made his comment, "That would be almost too much to hope for," what did you think he meant when you first read the novel? Could you guess at this point what was in store for Princess Una?

2. Why do you think Fidel was so harsh on Prince Felix in these scenes?

3. Favorite lines?

14 comments:

Beka said...

1) I sort of knew what was going to happen to Una from the get-go because I read reviews of the book before I decided to read it, but if I hadn't known, that clue might have hinted but I don't know if I could have figured it out.

2) Fidel's gruffness here actually caught me off guard. He seemed unnaturally gruff, so I definitely think the dragon poison was exaggerating his worst characteristics and bringing them out to light.

3) That line about Eanrin. Just love it!

Anonymous said...

1. I don't know what that means. No.

2. He cares about his son. Also, the dragon poison may have something to do with it.

3. "So Father won't die," Felix told himself. "He's too good to die like that."

Caitlyn

Emily Bennett said...

2. I think it's probably because of how much he's going through. The stress is getting to him and he's taking it out on his son. The dragon poison could definitely have something to do with it too though.

Hannah said...

1. Hmmm...I can't remember if I guessed or not. In fact I'm not even sure I caught that line the first time through. :)

2. I would say that the poison is definitely doing something to Fidel. I mean, even when a person is merely sick, they can get grumpy.

3. I love those lines about Sir Eanrin. I hope to hear the story of when Eanrin and--Spoiler Warning--his nephew traveled to Corrilond...and saw its bane.

Anna C. said...

2. I think the King was just a little bit overwhelmed with the whole situation. His harshness wasn't from unkindness, but from stress and fatigue and worry and Dragon-poisoning.

Question: I just noticed this, but does the fact that Janus is the two-faced Roman god of the gates have anything to do with Captain Janus' identity?

Courtney said...

2.I think Fidel was trying to hold on to his last family member. When he loses so much in such a short period of time it is not hard to believe that he would lashed out on his son. Often we are mean to those we love the most.

Rebekah said...

Oh, poor Una. She is so stubborn, but right here I really want to reach through and give her a hug.
"How can I be worthy of his love if I do not trust him?" Poor Una.

1)I was completely cryptified (not a real word, but I like the sound). I had no idea.

2)Ahh, its tough love. Felix can handle it.

And sorry to bother you with another question since you're so back-logged. But I've always wondered if there was an inner reason why almost EVERYONE in Parumvir has Latin names? Una, Felix, Fidel, Janus... to name a few.

Maiden G. said...

Hannah: Shh, spoiler in my comment, but yes! Think about how it says the dragon smoke works on you, turns you evil.
His nephew was there at the destruction... that's what turned him (maybe, a thought I have). All the fumes worked at him, and now....

Anonymous said...

Here is the address to a site where you can hear our friend the Wood Thrush. You can also see a picture

http://www.allaboutbirds.org/guide/Wood_Thrush

3)" 'How can I be worthy of his love if I do not trust him now?' "

Hannah said...

@ Maiden G. I think you're right. He was already suffering (think wedding in Arpiar going on the same time) and seeing that kind of power in that type of poison must've pushed him over the edge. Shhhhh....

Little Brown Sparrow said...

#1 - I read too quickly through the novel the first time through. I didn't quite catch any of the foreshadowing. ;P I feel really silly now, reading it through and catching all the hints and minor plot twists.

#2 - I think Fidel isn't thinking straight. He's upset because everything Aethelbald said is coming true and he wants to prove it wrong, to avoid fate, so to speak.

#3 - One physician hurrying from the king's chamber tripped on Felix's outstretched legs, cursed him roundly, an dhten realiing he was the crown prince, endeavored to make amends by telling what was happening inside. (p. 194)

I think I'm going to have to read ahead. The plot is getting so intense, I can't stand it!

In Christ,
Camryn

Meredith said...

1. Fidel said this startling statement becuase, with Aethelbald's wornings revisiting his mind, he knew that the Dragon's tormenting of his ictims was far worse than a quick death. Of course, I say all this now. When I first read the book, I remember being shocked by the statement, but I still understood that Una was in a terrifying predicament. I desperately wanted some form of relief to come to her.

2. The Dragon poison is corroding Fidel's reasoning, yet I think his response to Felix stems from the love he has for his son. Also, it's been a very harrowing experience for them all, so he'd naturally sound harsh.

Love the reference to Janus. Very clever.

Meredith said...

To Annymous: Absolutely loved the web site about the wood thrush! The sound is just as I imagined: attention-grabbing yet soothing as well. Liked how the site described the thrush's song as flute-like. Thanks for posting the site.

Jennette said...

1. I knew that something worse than death was going to happen, death being just the separation of the soul and body, but if Una succumbed to the Dragon, she'd be lost to the evil one.... I'm not exactly sure that is what I thought when I first read it. ha! But I did think there was something coming that was way worse than death.

2. Fidel is so harsh because he is trying to keep it together. He is guilt ridden, condemning himself for not listening Aethelbald, and he dearly loves his children, but he's up against an overwhelming enemy that he knows he can't beat, but instead of letting his emotions through, he's acting out in anger/rough/etc, keeping his real emotions at bay.