With hair so gold
And heart so cold
A face that’s lily
fair
Whose beauty is
beyond compare
Is my ladylove
Why don’t, my dear
You lend your ear
To your wooer’s words
You fly away like a
bird
Come back my ladylove
Gleamdren do
Love me true
And look again to me
My dear forever be
The sweetest ladylove
Condemn me why
When I said goodbye
For a moments due
Always coming back to
you
Be true my ladylove
My love won’t fail
It will avail
True and long and
good
Secure beyond my
boyhood
Oh, oh, my ladylove
Oh, my ladylove
My sweet, my ladylove
Oh, oh, ho, ho
Oho, my ladylove
5 comments:
Hannah-Kate, I think you captured Eanrin's half-mocking, half-sincere attitude perfectly in your poem! I can almost imagine Gleamdren's reaction to it in my head! Awesome work! :D
I completely agree, Rebeka! I can almost see him smirking...
Very bouncy and fun!
Outstanding song! The repeated refrain of "My lady Love" and the ending put me in mind of some of the songs in Shakespeare's comedies. Great job!
Great job! I loved the pattern of the poem--the initial rhyme scheme, then the repeat of "my ladylove." Awesome poem!
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