A
large, cloaked figure slipped into the bedchambers of Princess Alana, the only
child of King Odenson, ruler of the people of Ostiero. The figure crept to the
princess’ bed, reached out his hands, and shook her.
Alana’s
eyes flew open and her hand groped for the knife she always kept beneath her
pillow. When she saw the cloaked figure, however, she froze.
“Uncle,”
Alana said. “What is it?”
“They’ve
broken through our defenses,” the cloaked figure answered. “There’s no time to explain;
we must flee.”
Alana
obediently climbed out of bed and pulled on her boots. Then she pulled her
breastplate over her nightgown.
“Follow
me,” her uncle urged, hurrying to the door.
Alana
grabbed her dagger and hurried after him. Together, they crept down the now
deserted hallways of the great stone castle that their ancestors constructed
after discovering the sliver of fertile land wedged between the Great Woods and
the ocean.
“Where
is Father?” Alana whispered.
“He
is leading the guards in defense of the courtyard,” her uncle answered.
“Lord
Vidiner and his men are already within our walls?”
Her
uncle nodded solemnly. “I’d be with your father right now, except-”
“He
sent you to escort me to safety?”
Her
uncle nodded again. “Now come.”
He removed
a candle from his cloak, lit it, and led her into a tower that had always been
forbidden for her explore before. Inside was a winding staircase.
“Where
does this lead?” Alana asked as she followed her uncle down the stairs.
“It’ll
take us right to the wall,” he answered.
“Are
we leaving the castle, then?”
“Yes.”
“So
Vidiner assembled more men than we anticipated?”
“Yes.”
Alana
sucked in her breath. “Then I must make my way to the Valkyries. They’ll assist
us.”
“No,”
her uncle answered forcefully as they reached the bottom of the stairway.
“They
will,” Alana insisted. “They’ve always been loyal to my father before. And am I
not myself the handmaiden of Lady Vashtra, captain of the Valkyries?”
Her
uncle pushed open the great wood door separating them from the outside, and
then paused. “You misunderstand me, brother’s daughter. I do not doubt the
Valkyries’ loyalty. It is simply that I will not have you running off alone-”
“But-”
Her
uncle silenced her with a Look. “You know as well as I that it is forbidden for
a man to go to the village of the Valkyries.”
“Well,
yes, but I know the way well, and-”
“You
were always with a female escort then. Now, let us focus on escaping the
castle. Then we shall discuss our next move.” Then he blew out the
candle and returned it to the folds of his cloak.
Alana
nodded and they both slipped out into the outer courtyard. In the distance,
Alana heard the sounds of battle, and she prayed silently that her father would
make it through the battle. For, if he survived the initial attack, Lord
Vidiner would be bound by the Code of War to simply hold him prisoner- not kill
him.
“There’s
a secret exit this way,” her uncle said, pulling her towards the wall.
“Halt!”
someone cried not far from them. His voice had the undeniable accent of Lord
Vidiner’s village.
“Run,”
Alana’s uncle whispered to her, and the pair hurried towards the wall.
Then,
suddenly, Alana stumbled.
“Alana?”
her uncle asked. Then his eyes fell on the arrow protruding from his niece’s
waist.
Alana
stared at the arrow numbly. She had practiced for years of battle, but this was
her first real wound. With a sort of morbid focus, she pulled the arrow out of
her side and threw it to the ground before pressing her hand tightly to the
wound.
Meanwhile,
her uncle unsheathed the sword hidden under his cloak and turned towards the
distant figure.
“Be
gone,” he ordered, his tone so menacing that the enemy archer turned to flee.
Then Alana’s uncle groped for the hidden door with fervor until his hand found it.
He removed a key from his pocket, unlocked the door, and pushed it open. With
that deed done, her uncle spun around and took Alana’s hand. “Come, Alana.”
They
both stumbled out into the open land.
“Where
do we go now?” Alana asked, thankful for the numbing adrenaline.
“This
way,” her uncle answered, pulling her to the side.
Suddenly,
though their surroundings remained the same, they also changed; blurred, even.
“Where
are we?” Alana asked as she was pulled forward by her uncle. “Am I delirious?”
“You
are not delirious, brother’s daughter. We are walking the Safe Path. My father
walked on it, and his father before him, and his father before him.
Indeed, this is the very Path that led our ancestors to Ostiero.”
“Truly?’’
Her
uncle nodded. “It has guided and protected our kinsmen since they discovered
it. We have passed knowledge of this Path down generation to generation. It is
time that you learn of it now, brother’s daughter.”
“Where
does it lead?”
“Refuge.
It has always appeared for our kinsmen when they needed it, and it has always
led them to safety when they chose it.”
“But
it’s leading us to the Great Woods!” Alana cried. Had she not, all her life
been told legends of the magic and peril of the Woods?
“Then
into the Great Woods we shall go,” her uncle answered.
“You
trust this Path greatly.”
Her
uncle nodded. “I do.”
“Then
so do I.”
Together,
Uncle and Niece followed the Path into Goldstone Woods.
Dame
Imraldera sat at her desk, carefully copying a poem from a crumbling scroll
into a blank book. Bard Eanrin sat on a couch, confidently copying a poem from
his mind into another book. They made an odd pair- one a short, dark-skinned
dark-haired mortal maid, and the other a cat-like, golden-eyed fiery-haired
Faerie poet. Even so, they had shared many an adventure and were both knights
of Farthestshore and guardians of the Haven.
“This
is a very peculiar poem,” Imraldera said.
“One
of mine?” Eanrin asked, his voice golden.
“No,
yours is more than just very peculiar,” Imraldera answered.
“I’ll
have you know-”
“I
know- you’re the most celebrated bard of all time.” Imraldera rolled her eyes.
“But this poet isn’t; indeed, he only wrote one poem- and it’s unfinished.”
“That
would help explain his obscurity. Well, read it to me if you wish.” Eanrin
casually leaned back on his couch and pulled his red cap over his eyes.
Imraldera
cleared her throat and read:
“My
child, one day you shall leave my home.
One
day you shall walk alone.
Though
I’m not with you, my teaching will be.
Won’t
you remember me?
“And
if you’ll follow the Path I’ve set,
If
my ways you won’t forget,
You’ll
find that with you, my own guide walks along.
Won’t
you list’n to His song:”
“What’s
so odd about it?” Eanrin asked. “It sounded like a proper ending to me.”
“But
the punctuation is all wrong.” Imraldera furrowed her dark brows. “How
did he intend to end
it-?”
Suddenly,
a tall, plain-faced man stepped into the library.
Both
Imraldera and Eanrin jumped up.
“My
lord,” Eanrin greeted.
“Two
mortals walk my Path,” the Prince of Farthestshore said. “I am leading them
here. Tend to their wounds and give them shelter as long as they wish.”
“Yes,
my lord,” Eanrin and Imraldera said in unison.
Then,
just as suddenly as he had appeared, the Prince of Farthestshore vanished.
The
two knights walked over to the library’s window. The window showed many
different views of the Woods Between, but now it showed two mortals- one, a
bearded man, and the other, a pale, blonde girl closer to womanhood than
childhood.
“Please,”
the man called up. “She’s hurt.”
As
if to prove his point, the girl promptly passed out.
When
Alana regained consciousness, she found herself in a peculiar room that seemed
both majestic and simple. Two people were conversing at the end of her bed- her
uncle and a pretty girl with darker coloring than Alana had ever seen on a
person. The girl fit into the paradoxical room in the fact that she didn’t look
much older than Alana herself, but the girl’s eyes were eyes that had seen
much.
“Uncle?”
Alana said. “Where am I?”
Her
uncle hurried to her side. “Alana, how do you feel?”
Alana
sat up. “Like I slept too much.”
“You
were badly injured,” her uncle pointed out.
“Oh,
yes, I was.” Alana looked down at her side. Her nightgown was ripped where the
arrow had torn it, but instead of the expected gash, there was only a faded
white scar. “But I’m not anymore. What happened?”
“The
Safe Path led us to this Haven,” her uncle answered. “And to the gentle Dame
Imraldera.” He gestured to the dark-skinned girl.
“And
Sir Eanrin,” the girl, Dame Imraldera, added.
“Yes,
him too,” Alana’s uncle agreed; though, by his tone, Alana deduced that her
uncle admired Sir Eanrin far less than he did Dame Imraldera. “Anyway,” he
uncle added, “the gentle dame tended to your injury.”
“Thank-you,
good dame,” Alana said.
“Think
nothing of it,” Imraldera answered, smiling. Her teeth were white, but slightly
crooked- yet the imperfection was somehow endearing.
“How
long have I been out?” Alana asked.
“I’m
not sure,” her uncle answered. “Time flows differently here.”
Imraldera
nodded.
“Then
I must haste to reach the valkyries,” Alana said. “My father may be Lord
Vidiner’s prisoner at this very moment.”
“You’re
not going anywhere, brother’s daughter,” her uncle answered. “You were just shot.
I’m not letting you go anywhere near danger again anytime soon.”
“But
Father needs me- the whole kingdom needs me to do this. And am I not
healed now?” Alana turned to Imraldera for support.
“Yes,
you are,” she agreed, “but you must listen to your uncle.”
Alana’s uncle nodded. “Your father entrusted you to me.”
“But
now Father needs our help-”
“I
know, but you’re my responsibility, not he.”
“He
is your king, though.”
“And
he gave me an order. More than that, though, he’s my brother, and I will
help him if I can- but not if it endangers you, his precious daughter.”
“I
am sixteen,” Alana pointed out. “And I’ve survived two battles-”
“The
last one only because Dame Imraldera nursed you and the first was when you were
an infant, and the enemy didn’t even break through our outer defenses.”
“But-”
“No.”
Alana
sighed.
Dame
Imraldera looked between Alana and her uncle and then cleared her throat. “Here
are some clothes to change into, Alana.” She laid a pile of brightly colored
garments- not unlike Imraldera’s own tunic and baggy trousers- on the bed. Then
she turned to Alana’s uncle. “Come; let us give her some privacy.”
He
nodded and then both he and Dame Imraldera left the room.
Alana
climbed out of bed and quickly changed into the strange clothes and pulled on
her boots, which were waiting for her at the end of the bed. She also found her
breastplate and knife. Then she crept to the window.
The
window’s scene shifted suddenly, giving Alana vertigo, but she stubbornly
opened the window. It opened without giving her any trouble, for the Haven kept
none against their will.
“Sorry,
Uncle,” Alana whispered. Then she jumped out.
The
ground was closer than Alana had anticipated, and it caught her quite by
surprise. When she recovered herself, she found herself in a forest-like area.
The grass was greener than any grass she had ever seen, and the trees were
different than the ones she was used to, but it still appeared to be a simple
forest. However, the way her skin crawled told her that many invisible dangers
surrounded her.
“Find
a Path,” Alana whispered to herself to still her nerves. “Find a Path and take
it to the Valkyries.”
Suddenly,
she became aware of Paths winding all around her. However, she could not tell
if the Safe Path was among them.
“Follow
me,” one of the Paths whispered. “I’ll take you where you wish to go.”
The
Path did not sound like the Safe Path, but the voice was calming; soothing.
“Take
me where I want to go,” Alana ordered. Then she stepped onto the Beguiling
Path.
Dame
Imraldera studied her most recently recorded poem as Alana’s uncle paced around
the library. Eanrin sat pleased as a cat and watched the man pace back and
forth.
“Something
on your mind, fellow?” Eanrin asked. “Cat got your tongue, perhaps?”
Imraldera
looked up from her book. “What is bothering you, Freeman?”
Alana’s
uncle paused. “What did you call me?”
“Your
name is Freeman, is it not?” Imraldera asked.
“Yes,
but how did you know? I never told you.”
“She
has this thing for names,” Eanrin offered.
Freeman
ignored him and continued to study Imraldera.
“Your
real name is very close to the name your parents gave you,” Imraldera
explained. “Once I saw your real name, it was easy to see your birth name. Now,
what’s bothering you?”
Freeman
shook his head like he could somehow shake away the strangeness around him.
“It’s Alana. I fear she’s right- we have to help my brother. But she’d have to
go to the Valkyries alone, and she’s not ready for that…”
“She’s
not ready, or you’re not ready?” Eanrin asked.
Freeman
turned to Eanrin. “Do you think yourself an expert on these matters, sir?”
Eanrin
smiled smugly. “I do, actually. I’ve been around for a while.”
“Maybe
you should try listening to Alana,” Imraldera offered. “Without getting
defensive. You might be able to reach an understanding.”
Freeman
nodded. “Yes, I think I shall.”
“Go
to her then,” Imraldera urged.
“I
shall.” Freeman left the room and walk to the room he knew Alana to be in. He
knocked. “Alana?”
He
received no answer, so again he knocked. “Alana?”
Again,
he received no answer.
“Alana,
I’m coming in now,” he called, opening the door.
He
did not find Alana in the room, however. Instead, he found a nearly
transparent, pink-tinted woman.
Freeman
did what any captain of the guard of Ostiero would do given the circumstances;
he yelped.
Both
Eanrin and Imraldera- still holding her pencil- rushed in. Eanrin took one
glance at the wispy woman and started shooing her back out the open window.
“Shoo!”
Eanrin cried. “Be gone from here! You’ll not lure any men here to their deaths,
for I am cleverer than that. Shoo!”
The
siren stuck her tongue out at Eanrin before flying back out the window.
Eanrin
victoriously shut the window. “Well, that’s that.”
“And
I’m cleverer than that too,” Freeman agreed rather shakily.
Eanrin
studied Freeman’s beard rather lazily. “Oh, I suppose you are a man.”
Freeman
blinked at Eanrin. In all his years, no one had ever doubted his manhood
before.
“Don’t
mind Eanrin,” Imraldera said. “He just doesn’t like admitting to having other
men in his territory.”
Freeman shook his head again; the strangeness of this place was overwhelming. Then he asked, “Where’s Alana?”
Freeman shook his head again; the strangeness of this place was overwhelming. Then he asked, “Where’s Alana?”
Imraldera
dropped her pencil and its collision with the ground echoed throughout the
room.
Finally,
Freeman found his voice again. “I must go find her.”
“Yes
you should,” Eanrin agreed.
Imraldera
gave him a Look.
“And
I shall accompany you,” Eanrin added with a sigh.
“You
must hurry,” Imraldera urged. “She could have stumbled upon any demesne by
now-”
“You’re
not coming?” Eanrin asked.
Imraldera
shook her head. “I shall not leave the Haven unguarded again. Remember last
time?”
“Too
well,” Eanrin agreed. Then he turned to Freeman. “Let’s go rescue the girl
then- wait, is Alana by any chance a princess?”
“She
is the only child and heir of my brother, King Odenson of Ostiero,” Freeman
answered proudly.
Eanrin
sighed. “It’s always a princess it seems.”
Freeman
raised an eyebrow. “You’ve rescued princesses before?”
“Yes.
In fact, it seems I’ve made a habit of it.”
Imraldera
waited until both men left the room before muttering to her, “I am not a
princess.” But she knew better than to argue this fact to Eanrin. Cats were always
right in their own eyes.
Then
Dame Imraldera returned to her library and looked down at the strange poem.
Suddenly, the solution to its mystery came to her.
“Of
course,” she breathed. “The poet didn’t write the last stanza because it was
not his to write. But the author of the last stanza won’t mind if I add his
words to the other poet’s poem.”
And
so, Dame Imraldera carefully copied:
Beyond
the final waters falling,
The
Song of Spheres recalling.
When
you’ve left; when I’ve freed you to walk your way,
Won’t
you return to me?
“So,
what’s your plan?” Freeman asked Eanrin as they hurried out of the Haven.
Eanrin
sniffed. “Typical mortal. Expect me to do all the work.”
“But
I thought you’d want to be in charge,” Freeman said.
“Of
course! Do you think you could navigate the Woods?” Eanrin shook his
head. “Mortals.” Then he transformed into a cat.
Freeman
blinked and stared at the cat standing where Eanrin had just stood. The
transformation had seems too mindless, so simple- and indeed, Eanrin was
cat-like even as a human, but still…
“You’re
a cat!” Freeman cried.
“Yes,”
the cat answered in Eanrin’s golden voice. “Don’t you want me to sniff out your
niece? Now, don’t freak out; we haven’t time for such nonsense.”
Freeman
nodded slowly.
“Good,”
Eanrin said. Then he sniffed the air. Both his ears and tail immediately
lowered. “Of all the Paths…”
“What?”
Freeman asked. “Where is she?”
“Hylenna’s
lair,” Eanrin answered. “I suppose it could be worse. The River could
have gotten her, and then we would have had to find a prince to kiss her-”
“There
will be no kissing of my niece!” Freeman cried.
“Of
course not,” Eanrin agreed. “The River hasn’t gotten her- Hylenna has.”
“Who
is Hylenna, exactly?”
“She’s
one of the newer Faerie queens. On her second life, I believe. She’s got a
silver tongue- some even claim that she has the power of hypnotism. I don’t
know if they’re right or not; I’ve never visited her myself. Guess we shall
find out now, hmm?”
“Yeah,
I guess we shall.”
Eanrin
nodded and then trotted into the Beguiling Path. Freeman followed close behind.
Alana
looked around the palace the Path had led her into. Everything was made of
glass, which was beautiful from a distance, but invisible when one neared any
one thing.
“Welcome
to my demesne,” a beautiful voice greeted.
Alana
turned to see a strangely beautiful- and beautifully strange- woman floating
several inches above the ground. The woman’s dress was layers of black and
white petticoats dancing around her, and her hair, which too was black and
white, floated around her face. Her eyes, however, were the strangest of all to
behold, for they were large, and apparently devoid of eyelids, eyelashes, and
eyebrows.
“Who
are you?” Alana breathed.
“I
am Hylenna, queen of this demesne,” the woman answered, her voice like music.
“I’m
sorry for intruding,” Alana said. “I thought the Path would lead me where I
wanted to go-”
“But
it has,” the woman answered. “You are a dreamer and an adventurer, are
you not?”
“Yes,
I am, actually.”
“And
you are out on your own for the first time, am I correct?”
“You
are.”
“Then
this is where you want to go. Do you have your guardian’s permission to
be out like this?”
“Uh,
not exactly…”
“Good!”
the woman cried. “Life is much more romantic that way. It is fortunate
that you had all those points in your favor, or else you might not have found my
Path- and then the River would most likely have gotten you-”
“The
River?” Alana immediately regretted interrupting the queen’s smooth words.
Queen
Hylenna nodded. “You needn’t fear; it cannot get you here. And don’t worry;
you’re welcome to stay here as long as you wish.”
Alana
smiled as the queen’s words- her voice, really- fell on her like a blanket.
“I’d like that.”
The
woman smiled back. “I knew you would. Tell me, is there anything I can do for
you, young one?”
“Could
you maybe talk some more?”
Hylenna’s
smile broadened. “Of course.”
“Careful
now,” Eanrin cautioned as he and Freeman crept through the glass castle.
“So,
uh, what’s a faerie queen like?” Freeman asked.
Eanrin
became a man again, and Freeman shook his head.
“Faerie
queens come in many varieties,” Eanrin said. “No two are alike.” He paused and
checked his reflection in the glass.
Freeman
continued walking to the end of the hallway. Then he froze. “Uh, Eanrin?”
“Yes?”
Eanrin answered, adjusting his red cloak.
“Would
you say Hylenna is strange and beautiful at the same time?” Freeman asked.
“Most
likely.”
“Would
she be rather floaty? Maybe have unusual hair?”
“Possibly.”
“Would
she have massive, lidless eyes?”
“I
don’t know!” Eanrin cried. “Why are you asking me these ridiculous questions
anyway?” Eanrin joined Freeman at the end of the hallway, which ended in a
balcony. He followed Freeman’s line of vision down to a large glass room below
them.
One
woman, who matched Freeman’s description, wove some tale which echoed throughout
the room. Sitting before the woman in utter rapture was Alana.
“I’ve
never seen someone hold Alana’s attention like that,” Freeman whispered. “She’s
always been rather twitchy. But that voice…”
Eanrin
said nothing. Instead, with his eyes still focused on the scene below them,
Eanrin removed his bright, red cap from his head and a comb from his pocket.
Then he began to methodically comb his hair.
Without
tearing his eyes from the scene below, Freeman asked, “Is that a nervous
habit?”
“No,”
Eanrin answered, too enthralled by the voice to even be indignant.
“Are
you nervous?”
“No.”
“Good,”
Freeman said, snatching the comb from Eanrin. “Because I am.”
Eanrin
didn’t even try to reclaim his comb.
“We’re
here for a reason, aren’t we?” Freeman asked after a few moments.
“Most
likely.”
“That
woman is somehow trapping both my niece and us with her words, isn’t she?”
“Possibly.”
“We’ve
had this conversation before, haven’t we?”
“I
don’t know!”
“In
that case-” Still no tearing his eyes from the scene below, Freeman reached
into his cloak pocket and pulled out a candle. He then broke off two pieces of
wax and plugged one into each of his ears before breaking off two other pieces
and handing them to Eanrin.
Eanrin
robotically took them and plugged his own ears. Then he snatched back his comb.
“Thieving mortals.”
“What
did you say?” Freeman asked, obliviously.
Eanrin
stared at Freeman blankly. “Did you say something? Oh, never mind. Shall we
fetch Alana, then?”
“What
did you say?” Freeman asked again.
Eanrin
groaned and pointed down at Alana.
Freeman
nodded. Then they both doubled back down the hallway to find a way down.
A
moment later, Eanrin and Freeman burst into the auditorium.
Alana
didn’t even look their way. Hylenna, however, faced them. “Welcome to my
demesne-”
Freeman
scooped up Alana and took off running towards the exit.
“Halt!”
Hylenna screamed, her hair swirling violently around her face. “She is a
willing guest of my home! Hardly in need of rescuing. Put her back!”
Eanrin
blinked at the queen. “Are you speaking to me?”
“Yes,
now put back my prisoner and listen to me. I said listen to me!”
Eanrin
blinked at her again, shrugged, and turned to follow Freeman.
“You
leave me no choice,” Hyllena said, her pupils beginning to spin in her eyes in
a hypnotizing fashion. “You will listen to me.”
When neither man noticed, Hylenna screamed, “Stop ignoring me! Turn around and look me in the eyes! Allow me to hypnotize you.”
But
of course, neither Eanrin nor Freeman heard her. They both hurried from the
auditorium and into the Safe Path.
Dame
Imraldera looked up from her work when Eanrin, Freeman, and Alana walked into
the Haven.
“I
see you were successful,” she said.
Eanrin,
forgetting about the wax in his ears, walked right past her.
Imraldera
stubbornly followed. “How did it go?”
Eanrin
didn’t answer; he didn’t even turn to face her.
“Eanrin?
Are you ignoring me? Can you even hear me?”
Eanrin
kept walking.
“Eanrin,
I love you more than Lady Gleamdren ever will.”
When
Eanrin doesn’t make a reaction of any kind, Imraldera sighed and stepped in
front of him with crossed arms.
Eanrin
blinked down at her for a moment and then removed the wax from his ears. “I’m
sorry, old girl, did you say something?”
“Nothing
you’d care to hear,” she answered.
Meanwhile,
in the library, Freeman removed his wax immediately.
“Are
you alright, Alana?” he asked.
“I am fine,” she answered despondently. “You were right about my not being able to walk alone. I am sorry I disobeyed you.”
“Well,
everything is fine now,” her uncle assured.
Alana
sighed. ”But it’s not.” Then she left the room.
Freeman
made to follow, but Imraldera returned to the room.
“Freeman,”
she said, “I wanted to show you something.”
“Oh?”
Imraldera
nodded and handed him the book with her most recently recorded poem in it. “I
think you should read this- can you read?”
“I
can,” he assured, taking the book. He read:
My
child, one day you shall leave my home.
One
day you shall walk alone.
Though
I’ll not be with you, my teaching will be.
Won’t
you remember me?
And
if you follow the Path I’ve set,
If
my ways you won’t forget,
You’ll
find that with you, my guide walks along.
Won’t
you list’n to His song:
Beyond the final waters falling,
The
Song of Spheres recalling.
When
you’ve left; when I’ve freed you to walk your way,
Won’t
you return to me?
Freeman
sighed and handed Imraldera back the book. “Thank-you.”
“Your
welcome,” she answered.
Freeman
nodded and walked into the room his niece had disappeared into.
Alana
was pacing around in circles. Eanrin was leaning lazily against the wall,
looking ready for a cat-nap.
“Your
uncle loves you and just wants what’s best for you,” Eanrin told her.
“I
know,” Alana admitted. “I just feel so restrained; so useless. Father
needs me and I’m doing nothing for him-”
“You
are now,” Freeman said suddenly.
Alana
froze. “What do you mean?”
“Your
father, my brother, needs us. As does our country. We shall take the
Safe Path back to Ostiero- and then you shall continue to the village of the
Valkyries.”
“Really?!”
Alana cried.
Her
uncle nodded solemnly. “We leave at once.” He turned to Dame Imraldera, who
stood in the doorway. “Thank-you for your assistance and hospitality.” Then he
turned to Eanrin. “Both of you.”
Imraldera
smiled. “It was our honor.”
Eanrin
nodded lazily.
Freeman
turned to Alana. “Are you ready?”
“I
believe so,” she answered. Then she hooked arms with her uncle and they both
stepped onto the Safe Path.
Once
they disappeared, Imraldera turned to Eanrin. “Do you think they’ll be able to
reclaim their home?”
“I
made a rule long ago to never underestimate mortals,” he answered. “But even
without that rule, I don’t doubt it. And if that father/brother of theirs has half
the willpower of either of them, he’ll be there waiting for them.”
Imraldera
smiled and looked towards where Freeman and Alana had last stood. “They’d make
good knights.”
“Yes,”
Eanrin agreed. “Yes, they would.”
Once
Freeman and Alana stepped out of the Great Woods into Ostiero, they paused.
Freeman
turned to his niece. “This is where we part ways. You know what you must do.”
Alana
nodded. “I must follow the Safe Path to the village of the Valkyries.”
“Yes,”
her uncle agreed. “The Path will protect you.”
“I
know. Do not worry, father’s brother; I shall not depart from it.”
Freeman
smiled. Indeed, he had never felt greater joy than when she said those words.
“We
shall meet again,” Alana assured before disappearing back into the Safe Path.
“I
know we shall,” her uncle answered before turning towards his brother’s
kingdom; confident that his niece would meet him there soon.
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Hahaha! I know laughing may not suit some of the tragedy in this story, but that was SO FUNNY! Great job, Jes!
ReplyDeleteVery creative! I love the description of Hylenna and her desmense.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite lines were:
Freeman turned to Eanrin. “Do you think yourself an expert on these matters, sir?”
Eanrin smiled smugly. “I do, actually. I’ve been around for a while.”
and...
"Eanrin, I love you more than Lady Gleamdren ever will."
Great job!
This is Jes Drew. I'm glad you both liked my story. I wrote it after I read Dragonwitch, and I meant it to be an immediate sequel. Now that I've read Shadow Hand, I see that it can still be. My story takes place between Imraldera's five year furlough to Southlands and Eanrin's three year vacation to Rudibous. This just goes to show you how someone's affections for someone can change slightly after copying that person's love poetry for someone else for three years. Though we all know that her affections haven't changed that much ;)
ReplyDeleteOo, Valkyries! Fun adventurous story with some delightful humor!
ReplyDeleteThis is a fun story with some great original characters! :-) I especially liked the message about trusting her to walk the Path and follow the Guide. Something we parents all must learn!
ReplyDeleteOh wow, this was great! I loved your characters and the relationship between Alana and her uncle. I adored Hylenna. Your characterization of her, even just in the small portion she was in, was immensely intriguing! The interactions between the characters was fantastic and dynamic, and it felt very natural. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteBlessings!
Melanie