tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post4874780213289257599..comments2024-03-23T02:45:17.058-04:00Comments on Tales of Goldstone Wood: Fan Fiction Contest 2013: Peacock of the PrinceAnne Elisabeth Stenglhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09462605949792523331noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-72066888064230583602013-08-13T17:35:27.061-04:002013-08-13T17:35:27.061-04:00Wonderful! I had thought of the peacock as a faeri...Wonderful! I had thought of the peacock as a faerie. Making him a Knight of Farthest Shore and the guardian of the young Emperor perfectly confirmed my suspicions! Thank you!Beckynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-40063898410152940092013-08-12T17:44:39.710-04:002013-08-12T17:44:39.710-04:00Well done! I love the idea of the Peacock being a ...Well done! I love the idea of the Peacock being a Knight; it fits so very well. And his whole personality... It was wonderful!<br />And... He has blue hair! *grin* Kira Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01068911623966107135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-80457720912621608972013-08-09T13:43:16.744-04:002013-08-09T13:43:16.744-04:00Love it! Faerie knights are fun characters to read...Love it! Faerie knights are fun characters to read about. Great job delving into one of Goldstone Wood's off the beaten paths other kingdoms!Rinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12339369969869686216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-34113487441821114612013-08-08T11:42:41.245-04:002013-08-08T11:42:41.245-04:00Thank you all! This was probably, out of all the s...Thank you all! This was probably, out of all the stories I've ever written, one of the most fun to put to the page. The characters kind of did their own thing--all I did was decide that they were going to be in the story, and then Anne's world took hold of it. :) I now know why so many people love to write Eanrin--these rather self-absorbed, vain Faerie knights are rather fun to write, aren't they?S.F. Gorskenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-11434178328138226942013-08-05T12:49:16.441-04:002013-08-05T12:49:16.441-04:00AWESOME! You captured the personality of Klahan an...AWESOME! You captured the personality of Klahan and his uncle perfectly! And it was so cool to see the peacock as a knight of Farthestshore. Wonderful writing and great rise and fall of action!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15674350834544871474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-22496309941001709692013-08-03T17:32:48.392-04:002013-08-03T17:32:48.392-04:00Love this! The tie-ins with Veiled Rose are amazin...Love this! The tie-ins with Veiled Rose are amazing, and making the peacock a knight is awesome. :-) I love emperor Klahan too.Jill Stenglhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13218641704241875981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-32488377996985937832013-08-02T13:34:31.863-04:002013-08-02T13:34:31.863-04:00Your prose is top-notch! I enjoyed how you fleshed...Your prose is top-notch! I enjoyed how you fleshed out the peacock and turned him into a Knight--a twist I definitely did not see coming! You entwined your story beautifully with the events of "Veiled Rose"--great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13171567731644896572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-3337948979306623132013-08-02T07:16:26.865-04:002013-08-02T07:16:26.865-04:00Hahaha! Yes! :DHahaha! Yes! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-11030742865272041222013-08-01T22:22:46.117-04:002013-08-01T22:22:46.117-04:00This was an outstanding story, and I loved that it...This was an outstanding story, and I loved that it was told from the peacock's perspective. So great that he was more than he seemed. I loved how you wove the scene with Lionheart into the story so seamlessly, and the humor was outstanding. Great job. God bless you.Meredithnoreply@blogger.com