tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post4706035205842208220..comments2024-03-23T02:45:17.058-04:00Comments on Tales of Goldstone Wood: A DANCE FOR THE BARD EANRIN: Athelas HaleAnne Elisabeth Stenglhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09462605949792523331noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-41092058729839366782022-08-03T13:00:30.693-04:002022-08-03T13:00:30.693-04:00Absolutely beautiful!!! Great message too.Absolutely beautiful!!! Great message too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-73807225014318359942014-09-14T17:18:46.398-04:002014-09-14T17:18:46.398-04:00This was so beautiful!! I adored how you wrote th...This was so beautiful!! I adored how you wrote the whole piece in 3rd person but kept it in Eanrin's head, so we experience the piece through him. And how you never describe how anything looks and force us to experience the piece, the story, and the characters through our other senses; you make us go in blind, the same way that Eanrin would experience it, and it's absolutely genius!! Bravo! Awesome job!<br /><br />Blessings! <br />MelanieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00221671042978201709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-32950356509735809052014-09-13T20:19:40.590-04:002014-09-13T20:19:40.590-04:00This story was so moving. I loved the little girl,...This story was so moving. I loved the little girl, Leehi, and how Eanrin finally overcame his discomfort and joined the people in their praise. The man's prayer was especially beautiful. <br /><br />Also, much as I love dear Eanrin, I have to say that sometimes "silly kitty" is the perfect description for him!Saranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-16873818663136705592014-09-06T20:27:13.163-04:002014-09-06T20:27:13.163-04:00Great message in this story, something we all need...Great message in this story, something we all need to be reminded of sometimes. :) I confess feeling like Eanrin more often than not.Sarah Penningtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06377945004067760298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-77306865667423235072014-09-05T18:54:53.641-04:002014-09-05T18:54:53.641-04:00An important message.I love the heart of the peopl...An important message.I love the heart of the people and their song of praise to Lumil Eliasul! Well done, Athelas.Beckynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-45149918626980655762014-09-02T17:13:23.977-04:002014-09-02T17:13:23.977-04:00Such a great story, and you wrote Eanrin just righ...Such a great story, and you wrote Eanrin just right! The "silly kitty" comment was great ;) Clarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597065432344069069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-74786017877944987922014-09-01T20:30:26.638-04:002014-09-01T20:30:26.638-04:00Poor Earnrin, will he ever understand? That was ve...Poor Earnrin, will he ever understand? That was very amusing but with some depth to. I really like it<br />JemmaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-22476365340242595982014-09-01T19:54:35.987-04:002014-09-01T19:54:35.987-04:00I agree with Meredith! It's so refreshing to ...I agree with Meredith! It's so refreshing to see Eanrin without his arrogance and smug!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08745444401384420773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-4623179558811311882014-09-01T16:06:13.309-04:002014-09-01T16:06:13.309-04:00I enjoyed seeing Eanrin at a vulnerable moment. T...I enjoyed seeing Eanrin at a vulnerable moment. The rhythm of the dancing and inclusion of the song of praise is excellent. Terrific job and such a beautiful message.Meredithnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-63106258936141083592014-09-01T12:01:04.896-04:002014-09-01T12:01:04.896-04:00So very sweet and touching, Athelas! The beginning...So very sweet and touching, Athelas! The beginning--oo, the beginning is especially good. I can see this soon after Starflower when Earnin is still trying to figure those mortals out!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15674350834544871474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-27138635609183810382014-09-01T11:24:31.889-04:002014-09-01T11:24:31.889-04:00This story is piercing. Very well written. I'm...This story is piercing. Very well written. I'm not sure what else to say, but that you did a great job. Oh, have you, per chance, listend to "Kryie Eleison" by Keith and Kristyn Getty? ghost ryterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08479200993336583174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-66785443239069223632014-09-01T07:35:13.551-04:002014-09-01T07:35:13.551-04:00The message you convey is beautiful, sweet, and mo...The message you convey is beautiful, sweet, and more than that, true. Great job, Athelas!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06401287896327956210noreply@blogger.com