tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post8111130285919972819..comments2024-03-23T02:45:17.058-04:00Comments on Tales of Goldstone Wood: TRANSFORMATION - Meredith BurtonAnne Elisabeth Stenglhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09462605949792523331noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-50334314766201578392015-09-12T17:26:08.359-04:002015-09-12T17:26:08.359-04:00Meredith, you did such an outstanding work retelli...Meredith, you did such an outstanding work retelling Mouse's story in rhyme. Beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-16325521824396239362015-09-10T16:56:36.986-04:002015-09-10T16:56:36.986-04:00Thus I shall obey, though nothing I am,
For a daug...Thus I shall obey, though nothing I am,<br />For a daughter obeys an absent mother’s commands.<br /><br />Beautiful, haunting verse!Pennynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-45110466203701233332015-09-04T11:52:59.879-04:002015-09-04T11:52:59.879-04:00This poem is great. Meredith, you did an outstandi...This poem is great. Meredith, you did an outstanding job retelling the story of Mouse. It flowed so very well, even though you took the time to touch on so many important details. Very impressive.Jonathannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-75600820517943342792015-09-03T18:21:17.606-04:002015-09-03T18:21:17.606-04:00Meredith, this is outstanding! It so perfectly tel...Meredith, this is outstanding! It so perfectly tells the tale of MOuse, and I love the last verse most of all! :D Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15674350834544871474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-63953522745291752382015-09-02T20:08:40.523-04:002015-09-02T20:08:40.523-04:00Oh this is beautiful! And it rhymes! Wonderful! I ...Oh this is beautiful! And it rhymes! Wonderful! I love it so much! Very very good job Meredith! I really really like this one. I'm kind of out of words but I hope I got across how much I love this! :)<br /><br />-Rebekah Lawrence (AKA Rebekah L / Stargazer )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7102067376746188002.post-10295253065833877202015-09-01T14:59:42.434-04:002015-09-01T14:59:42.434-04:00I love the story of Mouse and her journey, so I lo...I love the story of Mouse and her journey, so I loved this poem as well :). Well done, Meredith! ~Savannah P. Savannah P.noreply@blogger.com